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Tuesday, December 30, 2008 10:16 AM
Blogger - which I used to create the blog section of this website, and where my story, Foreign Body Reaction is being written (right in front of your eyes - rough draft through finish) is having problems - Google is aware, but not seemingly able to solve it quickly, so I'm puting the scenes as they are written here with on the main page. If they every get straighted out, I'll move them to where they belong. Meanshile, here are the latest two scenes from chapter 6. Scene 5 and 6.

FBR Scene 5

She carefully placed her feet through the wet fiddle neck ferns, making sure of her balance before reaching for the mushrooms. Even though fall was the normal time for mushroom hunting, there had been a few warm rains, and Darlene had found enough mushrooms over the last few days to provide a welcome relief to all their diets.She was off the ridge, across the stream and almost a mile west of the rock shelter, home,” she thought. She had just walked up the ridge line of this hill to near the summit. She listened carefully. Ben had done a good job of making them all scared of being found by anyone. She heard nothing human, and Jasper was busy with Mark this morning running the trap line east of the camp.

She had been too frightened to do this before, but she just had to know. Jasper was like fog in the woods, you never knew where she was, but she had watched her leave this morning with Mark and had followed them for a few minutes to make sure they headed out. She had told Ben and Bea that she was going mushroom hunting to clear her head.

She fished beneath her waterproof poncho to a leather bag that all of them carried, Bea called them possibility bags. It was rabbit skin of course, big enough to hold greens,camus bulbs, and plastic bags balled up at the bottom for less clean items like pitch wood or crayfish. A soft strap of twisted rabbit hide looped over her opposite shoulder to comfortably keep the bag in place.

Darlene burrowed down and found it. Her heart gave a guilty beat, as she felt the smooth cold plastic of her cell phone. She had stolen it from the shelf where Ben kept all the phones fully charged. No one was to use any of them, and they were left off with their batteries separate when they weren't physically on the charger. Ben had told them that the phone's GPS locater chips worked anytime the phone was on, whether you called anyone or not, and that there were some who said the Feds could actually turn on the phone and poll the GPS chip anytime that the battery was in it.

She had snatched the phone and buried it in the bottom of the bag as soon as Bea and Ben went outside to work on projects. Hopefully no one would be paying attention and notice that one of the three phones was missing.

“Yes.”

“It's Darlene.”

There was silence on the other end.
“Patricia?”

“No names you dumb bitch.”

“Sorry,” Darlene rushed to apologize.

“I had given up on you. You have been a very bad girl. More, you have been a very bad mother. Don't you care about your son?”

“Don't you hurt my son, I couldn't call, not until now, he has all the phones, I had to steal it, I had to wait, this was the first,” her voice caught in a hiccup, her words crashing out.

“Wow, I didn't hurt your son, now did I? But we had an agreement didn't we?

Darlene was silent, listening. She was disparate to find out if her son was OK, was being cared for.

“Didn't we.”

“Yes.”

“What did you agree to do?”

Darlene hesitated, and then spoke plaintive, soft. “To call you every week.”

“What did I agree to do?”

“To keep Jimmy at the group home.”

“Have you kept your agreement?”

“I couldn't, I just told you, we are like, like prisoners here. Ben controls everything, I'm taking a big chance right now . . .”

Patricia interrupted, “So you didn't keep your agreement and decided your son was not as important as your comfort. So you got your son turned over to adult care, but they didn't pick him up because they are, well, not responding. So you decided that the group home should turn him out onto the street in the winter. You're one hell of a mother.”

“You turned him out on the street?” Darlene wailed, “but you promised, I called you, I told you where we were. How could you do that,” she screamed at the phone, her voice echoing off the far hillside.

“I didn't do it. You did. Your decision, my hands were tied by our agreement. What could I do, I can't save everyone. Do you understand what is going on in the world you idiot? I certainly can't save some broken boy, not with good, whole people dying, right and left? You did this, only you Darlene, you turned your son out to die on the street.”

Darlene sobbed, mucus ran down her face.

“But not everyone is a liar and some of us treat our “friends” better than they deserve.”

“What?” muttered Darlene, lost in the image of her son freezing to death in a wheelchair, alone.

“I'm saying I went the extra mile for you Darlene. I saved your son, I got him back into another facility, a government facility. I saved your son Darlene.” Patricia's voice grew tender and soft. “I did it for you Darlene because I know you try, you do try. You work hard. It is that fucking Ben who hurt you, who almost killed your son. I saved him, I saved your son because I'm your friend Darlene.”

“yes, yes you are, oh thank you so much Patricia. Oh thank you, oh my god, when I think of Jimmy on the street, oh god.”

“Calm down, relax, friends take care of each other. Now you have to do better about calling me, and there is so much to catch up on. Do you have time for a friend? Can you help me now?”

Ten minutes later Patricia hung up the phone. She had simply hoped Ben and his group could simply have died from the flu. Hell, she thought, she had even sent in a team to make sure they were infected. She had the team vaccinated but they carried enough of the virus in capsules in their mouths to infect at least the women, while they raped them. She didn't want Global involved in this any longer. Arthur had become much too interested in this little side project of hers; she could feel him nosing about out there, trying to find the value.

She tapped the table top. Ben was a loose end and he needed to be tied off. Her conversation with that twit Darlene had been quite informative. Idly she brought up the screen of test subjects that were used during the first three months. The vaccine had been rushed to completion, and in the beginning she knew that palative measures had be researched too. Anything to give certain people more time to wait for the final vaccine. That wait had been crucial and successful, thanks to the many volunteers who had given their lives in the early trials. It had been worth it, the vaccine was nearly ninety percent effective if administered directly into the blood stream before exposure to the live virus. Vaccine production was in priority mode at every facility that could produce it, here, Europe, Asia, Australia. The right people had breathed a tremendous sigh of relief and sat back to watch a new world unfold. With half the population, oil, coal, all resources would go farther, global warming would be slowed, and good patriotic Americans could get to work on forging a new world that was disciplined, strong, and pure.

Patricia hit the page down a few times and saw Jimmy's name. Gee, he hadn't even made it through the first trial. He had died only 48 hours after she had in placed him in the program. Well, he was weak, just like his mother, she thought, but he had performed a useful service.

“As will Darlene,” she spoke out loud to her empty office.

Darlene slipped into the shelter, her basket filled with morels. She quickly replaced the phone on the shelf, carefully detaching the battery and got back to work, her face flushed, immensely relieved that her son was getting the best of care. Patricia had done so much for her, she had been a fool to go with Mark, he wasn't really interested in her anyway.

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FBR chapter 6, scene 6
Foreign Body Reaction, Alan McNeill
Chapter 6 Scene 5.

The floor of the forest moved. There it did it again. “Wow,” thought Jasper. She let her vision go wide, feeling, seeing, smelling and hearing the entire slope before her. In seeing it all, it was easy to see the small changes making their way up the slope towards the berry and alder bramble where Mark had left her a few minutes before. The movements were that of large gophers but without the hills and holes. Just swellings that rustled and ever so slightly moved. There were seven people sized gophers moving up the hill. They were really obvious once you knew how to look.

Jasper melted back through the blackberries, without disburbing a single cane. She stayed low until she was over the crown of the road cut above her, then set off after Mark. She stopped every few hundred yards to crawl to the edge of the road and check the mountain side below her. She didn't find any other big gophers except those seven that were moving slowly up the ridge towards home.

Jasper was looking for deer or elk, which with her help Mark had come to prefer as their main meat source. They had thinned out the rabbits and Mark had finally become comfortable with Jasper getting in close to the larger game and spearing it, quickly and quietly.

It was the first week of March and Jasper toyed with her small spear, twirling like a baton as she ambled down the road. She took no pains to hide herself here as the crows were taunting what they believed was an owl hiding in a tree, which required a lot of crows because they had nothing good to say about owls, and of vice versa too. However, they made excellent lookouts and had already dismissed Jasper as not worthy of interrupting their deadly serious task of owl harassment, all the more funny to Jasper as they were yelling at a small dead fall of leaves and twigs stuck in near the tree top. There was no owl there, but Jasper knew how crows were, it really didn't matter, for if nothing else it was good practice. Jasper liked crows because they had loud opinions, good eye sight and great hearing. If any human approached, long before she would hear them, the crows would be delighted to tell the entire forest about it. Yep, you could always count on crows.

Mark was squatted checking for tracks, vehicle tracks, when Jasper appeared next to him.

“Christ!” said Mark. “I told you to watch the hillside until I got back.” He calmed himself down. Since Jasper's “transformation” as he thought of it, he was no longer the peerless woodsman. Now, when Jasper was in the forest he felt like he had a flashing neon sign on him.

One day he had made every effort to loose her, ending up completely hidden in a leaf and bramble blind. He didn't like to brag, at least to others, but he couldn't think of anyone, military or otherwise who should have been able to find him. Besides, Jasper had no clue that he was trying to hide from her. He just wanted to see if he could do it. While he had slowly been studying, with no motion of his head, the small area in front of the blind, he had become aware of her head right next to his, trying to see what Mark was looking at. He hadn't heard her, hadn't seen her. She just materialized as far as Mark was concerned.

Jasper found almost everything funny, at least when she was in the woods with him, but she seemed anxious now.
“There are seven people working up the hillside towards home. They are wearing some sort of complete camouflage and they are moving very slowly. I didn't see weapons, and their camoflage is really good.”

“Shit, Ben needs to know this right now. I hope everyone is at the shelter.”

“When I left, everyone but Darlene was close by.”

“Where was Darlene?”

“I don't know, collecting mushrooms I think. After I tell Ben about the men, should I go get her?”

Mark gathered his gear and said show me where you saw the men, then tell Ben and go get Darlene. I don't know what Ben is going to want to do about this, but if your description is acurate, then I think we are looking at soldiers in ghilly suits, and they will be armed. Christ I don't know what we're going to do now.”

“Do you want me to stop them?” said Jasper as they set off up the deer trail, cutting directly back to the shelter.

Mark put his arm around her shoulder and said, “ No, no honey, these men are more than a match for you. Think of them as a hunting machine. If they are military we need to stay away from them.”

Jasper looked at Mark, “Why are then coming here?”

Mark shook his head. “I don't know but I bet it is somehow tied up with that woman you saw the day, ah the day.” He hesitated, he hadn't talked much about that day with anyone, he wasn't sure what Jasper saw or remembered. “Anyway, I'm sure we'll find out.”

As Mark set off directly up hill Jasper lagged a bit behind, listening. The crows were diverted from the owl practice, they were cawing at something larger and noisier than the men gophers. She jogged after Mark wondering how not to scare him with the news. Trucks are coming too.

Wednesday, December 24, 2008 2:23 PM

Hey free chickens everywhere! I had a hawk land at my camp site today while Phil was visiting and I managed to get these shots.

For those wondering what happened to Foreign Body Reaction - the story - I'm back working on it and hope to be cranking out new prose tomorrow. It is hard starting back up as I have changed and the financial collapsed (which I didn't see coming) has happened which means that at some point I will have to go back and "fix" my future history. Meanwhile I won't do that because I would end up writing the whole thing again.

Right, the immature hawk did the head swivel to watch me slowly open the trailer door.

He flew as soon as I took a few shots, and shooting fast I got three shots - two of which you see here and below.

I particularly like the wing flip here - they are so beautiful in flight.

 

Tuesday, December 30, 2008 10:37 AM Monday, December 22, 2008 3:26 PM

Hi chicklets,

I've had internal resistance to getting started with photos and opinion this year. The horrible financial collapse - the free fall we are currently in makes it difficult to write, think and take in my personal loss and yours. However this is just the beginning. The weather has been right there with it's own insanity. While you're enjoying snow on the Willamette Valley floor, plunging temperatures and freezing rain, black ice, missed work and wet socks, I've had Tyson wash flood, TWICE!
On the right you can see the beginning of the first one two weeks ago.

Hard to see here, but it is about four hours later and the water has filled the entire wash and is roaring. It is climbing up the bank towards my campsite. The trailer is about 50 feet from this water reflected in the flash. Yep, I chickened out and moved the trailer and slept closer to 95 south about a half mile from here.

The water rose until about midnight. What was odd was that not all that much rain fell here, but it must have in the mountains. I watched trees go by tumbling, grinding, groaning. I had never seen any water (not a drop) in the wash before so I was cherry to freak out. I did.

About 12 hours later I moved back to my spot and the water was draining. Here you are looking over the edge of a 10' bank which is the edge of my "domain" in the LTVA. You define your domain, if you so choose by putting rocks around it, or a least where vehicles could get in. I have "rocked" off about a 150' by 75' river view piece for the winter. Cost - $180 this year for 6 months.

 

Here is a gloomly look at the campsite looking down the new tent - quite large - without rain fly installed yet, the trailer truck and indoor outdoor carpeting essential to a seasoned desert rat.
   
   
   


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