Saturday, December 29, 2007

FBR chapter 3 scene 2

Ben stayed very still.


Move.” A rough hand pushed him towards the shed door. Just short of the wall, he was kicked to his knees.


Put your hands behind your head.”


What do you want?” hissed Ben in exasperation. The words were barely out of his mouth when a blow sent him sideways into the gravel.


Get up, put your hands behind your head.” The barrel of the pistol pressed painfully into the back of Ben's head. Slowly he struggled to his knees and put his hands behind his head.


Someone frisked Ben quickly and efficiently.


Clean.”


Arthur bent down near Ben's ear. “We have to kill you now.” The voice was so matter of fact, so assuming of the right to do whatever he wanted, Ben's stomach clenched. He was going to die right here.


Whether it was the car crash, the night laying hidden on the cold wet ground, lack of food and water, or just simple primitive fear, Ben felt his bladder let go and the warmth saturate his pants and puddle on the ground around him. Slowly he slumped and fell over. The distant sound of men's laughter was the last thing he heard.


Wake the fuck up fagot” He found himself being shaken. Cold water splashed into his face, and he sputtered fully awake.


Arthur squatted near him in the dirt, careful, not to actually kneel in the gravel. The noise of the helicopter rotors was gone.


You have been a very very bad boy Ben. You have truly pissed off people, important people. These people Ben, these people solve their problems very quickly. I know that Ben because I am hired to solve those very problems. Do you understand me?”


Ben remained silent for a moment. “What are you talking about, I'm just a line walker for Barrone Row. . .”


Arthur's arm flashed out and cuffed Ben across the face, knocking him flat to the urine soaked ground.
“Do you understand me?” Arthur waited while Ben wiped the blood from his nose on the sleeve of his work shirt and stared with hatred at the man who was about to kill him.


Fuck you, you're going to kill me anyway, so answer your own fucking questions!”


Ben prepared himself for the blow, but it stopped just inches away from his face, and turned into a gentle play slap.


There you are, I knew you had to be in there somewhere. Do you know who I am Ben?”


Ben nodded. “I think so.”


Good, good. You see Ben, I do have discretion. These other men,” gesturing around them to the four other men who had taken up positions around Ben, “well they do what they are ordered to.” If I wasn't here Ben, you would have died when you opened the door to the tool shed. You understand that right.”


Ben merely stared at Arthur, wondering where this was going.


So Ben, you could actually say I have saved your life today, right? Ben simply stared back in disbelief at Arthur.


Are you fucking crazy?” asked Ben. This time the blow was not a caress, it lashed out slapping Ben flat. In a instant Arthur was on his feet, his gun's barrel wedged behind Ben's ear as Ben lay flat on the gravel. Arthur's arm was shaking, vibrating.

Ben simply cowered and waited for the inevitable end to this confusion.


Arthur stood up, “pick him up” he ordered two of the men. Without effort the two black clad security men each grabbed an arm and pulled him to his feet.


Arthur was all business now. “Ben, you have ten seconds to talk to me, “ he said, raising the pistol to Ben's forehead.


The men on each side of Ben turned their heads away as not to be splashed by the blood and brain matter that were inevitable when Arthur shot a subject in the forehead.


I don't know what you think I did,” Ben cried.


I believe you Ben, I think you really don't know. But Lady P does not come all this way for nothing Ben. I think you saw something. She must think you saw something. Think Ben, think and save your life. I can do that you know, I have the option not to squeeze this trigger Ben, but you have to help me. What did you see,” shouted Arthur.


Fuck I don't know, just this pipeline, just this diversion off the Connector. I don't know, it's nothing, its not important!” Ben was practically shouting as Arthur grimaced. Just maybe, he thought, Ben really didn't know anything, fucking Patricia.


Arthur hesitated, lost in thought for a moment. He hadn't really looked around when they had set this trap for Ben. They knew he hadn't come down the hillside, and this was the only structure within miles, so he had sent his men in, cut the lock off and waited for Ben to make his way here. Once in the compound and in the shed, they had closed in, signaling the helicopter to land.


Maybe this was what Patricia had been protecting, this compound. Arthur lowered the gun fractionally. “What is this place Ben?”


I don't know exactly, some sort of spur line off the gas and liquids pipeline on the hill. It is odd, I've never seen anything like it.”


Arthur looked around, at the shed again, and motioned to the two guards to hold Ben. Arthur entered the shed, looked around saw the cinder block construction on the inside, hidden by the cheap old galvanized steel roofing and siding. It was a very nice small shed, build to look old and neglected. The floor was concrete with two large inset steel plates. There were no handles and no way to lift them.


Possibly Ben is on to something, thought Arthur, but what? Arthur left the shed. “So what is this Ben?”


I don't know, it's some sort of small pipeline but there are no pumps.” Ben did not mention the three cleared areas outside the fence that might be buried tanks.


Two bad Ben, I guess you can't help me after all.” With that Arthur raised his weapon and motioned the two men away. As he did so, one of the other guards on the perimeter called “Incoming.”


Arthur hesitated and listened. There was the gentle thump thump of the old style helicopters. Before variable pitch, the “thump thump thump was characteristic of the heavy military helicopters. Global used nearly silent blade designs, but this was sounded military. It was coming their way.


Shit,” said Arthur, almost to himself, but then realized this was for the best. He didn't think Ben was being completely honest, and perhaps they should wait a bit before delivering his body to Homeland Security. Perhaps Patricia had grown impatient and roped in the local National Guard out of Eugene. Time to be going.


Arthur motioned to the guards to toss Ben into the shed. Without further discussion Ben was dumped onto the floor of the shed, the heavy door was slammed shut, and Ben could just hear a padlock being threaded through the hasp of the door. Then there was a whistling should, a whispering rise and a whine as the black helicopter in the compound lifted off. Inside the shed, Ben couldn't hear if the second helicopter had come closer, and with the closing of the door, the lights had shut off.


Crawling across the floor by touch, Ben found the remote by feel, behind the weed whacker. He pressed the button and the two steel plates rose slowly again and light flooded up from the floor below.


Tuesday, December 25, 2007

Christmas pictures up from Q

I wrote a little state of the mcnalan piece on the main site here.
Also I put up a picture of La Casa Blanca going together for the third year, and a picture from Midge Mountain.
Merry Christmas chickies. On to making Christmas dinner.
mcnalan

Sunday, December 23, 2007

FBR chapter 3 scene 1 and other stuff

Hi darlinks, chicklets and chickies. Merry Christmas!
Actually I'm celebrating the solstice. The shortest day is so apparent when you're somewhere were the sun is so much a part of every day. The Arizona desert is like a switch. Sun - get warmer. Sun go away, get much colder right now, right now actually as I'm typing this.

Below you'll find the first scene of chapter three, enjoy! What has Ben got himself into now? He just can't catch a break. Don't worry, company come-ith.

I'm writing a small essay for the main blog and have a few pictures to put up. I'm doing my first annual state of the alan message. It is all about me, the world, and therefore you, of course.

Foreign Body Reaction, Alan McNeill Chap 3, scene


FBR Chapter 3



The fence was formidable and unusual. Substantial chain link with a coiled razor wire top. It was mid day before Ben had found it. There were standard Federal warning plates bolted at eye level all around the perimeter of the fence. The enclosed area was not large, and Ben had edged closer searching for any monitoring equipment.


That morning, having reached the odd disturbed soil on the back of the mountain he had followed the buried ditch directly west. When Ben had found the sod covering the two pipelines the day before he had been reasonably sure that this was a pipeline diversion. Not the kind of work a thief or small group of thieves could handle. This was major pipeline work, but odd in that minimum damage had been done to the surrounding trees and brush. It was subtle. Nothing the pipeline companies did was subtle. Even their signs warning not to dig where yellow and visible at a distance.


This pipeline hadn't been on the high security maps Ben used in his job, and it looks like a concerted effort had been made to camouflage the digging. The trench was narrow, the cleared area hardly noticeable and most striking, the line was not straight. Every bend in a pipeline slows down the fluid or gas, and therefore straight lines were the rule. Ben had counted many slight bends over the two miles he had clicked off before reaching the large hill behind him.


Ben had been expecting to find something along the line. It takes enormous pumps to move gas and fluid through the lines. He had expected to intersect with an electric power line at the peak of the hills as they walked west. If someone high in the government had wanted a secret connection to this pipeline to lead off to the west there would have to be pumps at the highest point on the route to the cost. There would also be inspection points for inserting cleaning machines, called PIGS in the industry. These PIGS cleaned the line and monitored it continually for pressure declines, bending pipe walls, even corrosion.


In the first few miles this line had none of that, and until Ben reached the fence he wasn't sure how big the diversion pipe would be. He expected to find the pipe rising out of the ground entering a building, a shack where instrumentation kept the pipeline company informed of all data received. New construction now used satellite uplink and small dishes to constantly monitor the state of this precious cargo.


But the fence was odd, the compound just an empty half acre or so, with only a sheet metal shack at the center. Standard federal signs adorned the fence, no trespassing by federal law. The fence itself was curious. When Ben touched it he found it was not metal, but rather plastic. Even the razor wire coils at the top were plastic with thin steel razor inserts in woven into the coils. The fence was visible only when he was almost upon it. It was a mottled dull brown and green.


Ben knew that the only thing that had happened yesterday that started all this was that he had found the disturbed soil on the peak of the pipeline through the mountains on an area he had specifically told not to walk. Now he was marked for death by the Homeland Security's private police force, Global Security.


While it had to be this that was such a big deal Ben couldn't for the life of him figure out what the fucking difference a federal tap into a set of pipelines made to anyone. Since 9-11 the world had gotten to be one crazy place and no one more so than Homeland Security. Ben personally couldn't have cared one way or another and yesterday it was just one more weirdness in an ever weirder world. But today, well, today, Ben's life was upside down, his possessions largely destroyed, his friend somehow involved with that woman from Homeland Security, and the nation's top private security guy had been ordered to kill him. Why?


Ben had spent the hike here well aware that if they really brought resources to bare, they would certainly find him. In fact he was surprised that they hadn't found him already. Why hadn't he heard helicopters? It wasn't even raining. They must have satellites and helicopters and sensing gear that could pin point him in a minute if they wanted. Which made Ben think that perhaps this was not a full on Federal pursuit. Perhaps this was something else, maybe the one hand of the government doing something that the other hand knew nothing about?


Ben really couldn't say if it was the wise thing to do, but lacking any other plan all he could think to do was to try and find out what he was supposed to have figured out that was worth them killing him.


He found a point in the perimeter of the fence that was under a fir snag. They had not cleared the fence line, instead weaving the fence through the existing trees and brush. He climbed up the fir, his hands immediately getting sticky with pitch. Up at the ten foot level one branch cleared the fence and drooped down. He stood and edged out along the branch. He weight caused the branch to bend and push the razor wire flat. Ben edged out a little further and then dropped inside the fence hitting the ground a bit harder than he thought, but he rolled and was up in an instant waiting for some alarm to be visible or audible. Nothing.


He searched the compound for any evidence of the pipeline controls and except for the tool shed there was nothing. The tool shed door had no lock at all. It was all new but not very solid, this seemed unlikely to be a pumping station.


Ben slowly pulled the door open. As he did so, interior lights came on flooding the ten by twelve metal building with light. A clean concrete floor led to a pair of metal plates set in the floor. The plates were recessed into the concrete but their function was a mystery. Ben looked around the walls, but no control panel was obvious. The pipe lines did not rise like he expected they would, in fact, he wasn't sure if the hidden pipeline row tapped both the gas and liquid lines.


There were a few tools along the wall, a weed whacker and rakes. Out of place, but there on a small shelf with the red fuel can was what appeared to be a garage door opener. Ben examined it and tried pushing a few buttons. Nothing. He hit the up and down arrows and a loud thrumming sound began and the two metal plates pivot from their recess and open like a book. Lights clicked on deeper in the hole revealing a staircase. Ben kept the remote and cautiously descended the stairs.


A much larger room began at the bottom of the stairs. Instead of bringing the pipes up, they had brought the pumping station down. Only as Ben looked he realized that it was not a pumping station. There was no enormous electrical motor, no generators, and no incoming electric lines. The main lines in ended steel housing. On the outlet side of the steel boxes three pipes exited and formed a trident shape on the floor as they snaked their way to the rounded ends of holding three separate tanks. The tanks were only partially visible as they were mated to the concrete wall in the rear, about ten yards back. The tanks might be of any size, or in fact might be simply manifolds feeding more or larger tanks beyond.


Ben thought hard about what all this represented. If there was no pump, then the fuel was not being pushed elsewhere but instead stored here. But stored where?


Ben used the remote to close the doors after he reached ground level and went outside to study the area outside the fence, above the underground boundary of the room below.


While it wasn't obvious to him on the way in, outside the fence of the west the ground sloped up the next hill. There were three areas devoid of trees. Possibly these were storage tanks. Once again Ben descended and went to the wall on the rear level. He felt along the rear wall above and below where the pipes entered but it was smooth and unmarked. He turned and instead of ascending the stairs he walked around behind the stairwell. There a small fold down seat provided just enough area to see the small gauger set into the back of the stairwell. Three digital readouts, reading 220, 180, and 150 were back lit. He leaned a little forward enough to see the word MIL stenciled near each one. Military? Ben wasn't sure. It seemed to be a measurement of something. Perhaps they had build online storage here for the military.


Ben spent another fruitless few minutes looking through the room before ascending. It was late afternoon, and he hadn't learned exactly anything. What was the big deal, he found some offline underground storage tanks. If the markings meant gallons or thousands of gallons, it was interesting but not at a national level. Why the military would be involved with no bases or roads into here didn't make much sense. Also he hadn't seen military markings on any of the other equipment.


What if MIL didn't mean military? Ben had already worked his way out to ground level and closed the door behind him. Shit, if this place was so important, important enough to kill for, where was security. Hell, they didn't even have a lock on the door.


The MIL designation bugged him as he made his way towards the fence. He hadn't realized how sore and tired he was. Worse, he had learned, well not nothing but certainly not much.


He reached up for the branch, and as his arms extended he heard the chilling sound of a round being ratcheted into a pistol's breach.


Stay very still Ben,” said a hard, dispassionate voice.”We have some questions for you.”

Ben froze, fuck! The man whispered something that Ben couldn't hear and within seconds a black helicopter began setting down in the middle of the fenced yard.


End Chapter three, scene one.

Thursday, December 20, 2007

FBR scenes 4 and 5 concludes chapter 2

I found I needed one more scene in Chapter two, and here it is. I have put the combined .pdf file of Chapter 1 and 2 over on the right hand navigation menu. Chapter 3 will begin soonest on the blog as usual.
I had an exciting few days where I found that my driver's license was expired and could not be renewed by mail as I'm over 50, thus requiring an eye test. Thus Sunday I flew in the Portland where Dianne picked me up. We did the DMV thing Monday morning and I flew back to Phoenix Tuesday night. Expensive mistake. Oh well. Also, my starter failed on the truck - first thing to break on this truck. I love this truck! I had my mojo working, luck holding, and I was able to get it started - get to the little NAPA parts store in town (not shutting off the motor, thank you), and then out into the desert where I changed it. A starter swap should be 1/2 hour or so. It took me about an hour and twenty due to the fact that the giant 460 Ford motor takes up ALL the usable space in the truck engine compartment. The back bolt of the starter motor is in a very very tight spot. Got it though. Good luck continues, have to return the old starter for the core charge this morning.

Without further ado, here is the last scene of Chapter 2.


Foreign Body Reaction, Alan McNeill Chap 2, scene 4


Kill him. “


Arthur said nothing, standing with his arms crossed, across his vest. He was dressed completely in black. Lightweight waterproof black boots, his security pants tucked in to their speed laced tops. A simple black belt wrapped around his narrow waist. A black Global Security T-shirt was covered by a dull black armored vest, inserts above the heart and lung for higher velocity bullets gave his chest a segmented look, like the shell of a tortoise. Unlike his men he didn't wear the Global black baseball cap with the Global logo. The cold drizzle didn't seem to make him uncomfortable. His close cropped buzz cut was beaded drops of water, but his head was angled down, thinking.


Did you hear me,”


What is so important here?” he said, his voice low, almost absorbed in the thick wet night of the Pacific Northwest.


Patricia moved close in to him, her eyes even with his chin. She was not small, at five foot seven, but his six foot two inch frame seemed bigger up close.

That is not your concern,” she hissed. “He needs to be removed permanently. Do you understand?” she said, moving in even closer.


Arthur did not step back, but instead leaned forward. “Sign an order, and he'll be dead tonight.”


Patricia stepped back a half step. “Nothing written, nothing taped, no video, nothing, just make him go away. Of course we'll cover your company's exposure should there be any problems.”


Arthur snorted back a laugh, the sound rumbling in his chest. “That's rich.” He dug at the soil with the toe of his boot. He was well aware that nothing was going to be written down about any security work that Homeland Security farmed out. They used companies like his because they were fare outside of Congressional oversight. He waited.


You're bidding on the Gulf job in Louisiana, right?”


Yes we are.”


I think we both know why you are here personally tonight Arthur, or perhaps you just missed me? Is that it Arthur, you're horny?”


Arthur looked up. She was right of course, on both counts. He was here because she was here. She was the key to a large contract in the Gulf of Mexico for his firm. He was also horny, but it had been a long time since he had been excited by her. This was work.


Yes, I missed you. We'll win the contract anyway. You know we provide the results you want.”


Then fucking prove it!” she hissed. “Kill him, show me proof instead of the incompetent shit I've seen here tonight. Quick, clean, done, that's what I want to hear. You do that, you won't have to wait for any bid result, the contract is yours.”


Without waiting for her reply she spun on her foot, walked past the blood on the ground where Jacob had so recently laid and got into her SUV and left.



Foreign Body Reaction, Alan McNeill Chapter 2, scene 5


Arthur was well aware that there was nothing here except the gas pipeline and a secret hazardous fluids pipeline. The first was public knowledge and the second transported gasoline, jet fuel, diesel and kerosene and was therefore somewhat secret. With the price of gasoline at thirty five dollars a gallon, the pipeline was transporting liquid gold in this new fuel scare age. It was standard practice to hide the location of these fuel pipelines, starting back in 2007 when all the maps of pipelines became need to know only. Still, this was not enough to bring someone of Patricia's importance out here at three in the morning.


He shrugged, turned and signaled to the two men, invisible in the surrounding brush, to begin sweeping down the flanks of the ridge towards town. This was the only possible escape route for Ben. They would set up electronic traps on all the exit roads then sit back and catch him as he came through. Arthur knew that he had left the wreck of his truck without a shirt, phone, water or food. He would have to come out soon.


Concerning the request to kill Ben, well, that would be after he learned what Ben knew. There was something bigger than pipeline security going on here. Of course that was why he was here himself at three AM. He was the owner of Global Security, one of the three largest security firms in the country, and yet Patricia never commented on his presence tonight. How odd, indeed, there was something to discover here and it involved big money.


#


The first man brushed by Ben, just a few feet away. Ben lay frozen in fear on the wet ground. After he heard Patricia's car coming up the grade he had hastily repacked his pipe cache and snaked himself into a blackberry thicket just off the clearing near the outhouse. Small animals had beat out a hollow in the middle of the thicket for safety from the coyotes hawks, owls, raccoons and mountain lions. Ben's cache next to him. Ben pulled loose debris over the tube to hide it's whiteness. He lay perfectly still sure that a bullet would shatter the back of his head. Ben assumed they had night vision equipment, and from his position Ben had clearly heard the woman order him killed.


But the figure, a quiet phantom in the dark slid by and continued on down the mountain.Ben worked to control his breathing. All thoughts of the cold and wet were gone. He had to act but the second vehicle was still up the mountain. He had watched Jacob struggle to his feet while the woman and security guy spoke and make his way back to his vehicle. He had driven off a few minutes before Patricia had followed. He wasn't safe to go down the mountain yet he couldn't stay here. They would eventually find him come daylight.


He watched Arthur return to the SUV. The SUV's wheels chattered as they sought purchase on the loose gravel, found it, and the vehicle sped down the logging road towards town.


Ben lay as still as he could until the sound of the second SUV passing faded. A few moments before he had heard a second man somewhere off to his right, but that noise had faded. Ben lay still, a little warmer now, the plastic garbage bag was damp but actually pretty warm, and it was drier under the thick canopy of the blackberry leaves and canes. Ben knew he had to get moving. He was just now aware of aches in his shoulder blade and one knee. The crash had shocked him, but his body was waking up to that pain now, and stiffening.


He just couldn't believe this shit. In just a few short hours, one single day really, his simple perfect life had changed to unimaginable chaos. Ben hated chaos. He was a planner, a list guy, a project person. Finish a thing, cross it off the list. But now, he was completely confused. He had seen Jacob show up and talk to the very people who were trying to kill him apparently. He had seen his friend get pistol whipped across the face. Who was that bitch? He struggled to remember who the security guy was. He was familiar, someone he had seen on the news.


Ben tried to focus on what he should do now. Jesus, there were people who wanted to kill him, what do you do when people want to kill you. Call the cops, but what if they are the cops, bigger than cops? Shit! There in the small protected area of berry canes, his cache tube alongside, Ben grappled unsuccessfully for a way to solve this, to simplify this, to retain control. He had only one choice right now. Run. Instead, his body betrayed him and he slid into sleep.

#


Sunlight penetrating the thicket woke Ben hours later. Damn he was cold! He froze at the sound of something crashing through the brush. A deer bounded into the gravel road way and began working down towards him. He could see it was a doe. Soon two more does followed, then a beautiful four point buck.


Ben began wiggling out of the canes, carefully not to avoid as many of the thorns as possible. The deer watched for a while then began then fled down the road as he emerged. The deer were a pretty sure indication that the ridge was deserted.


He was thirsty and had to pee, but first he wanted to get some distance from the burned trailer site.. He had heard the security guy sending the searchers down back toward the main road, but he knew they would be back. At least that is what he would do if he was hunting him.


He tried to jog, but found that his back, hip and shoulder were too stiff. He limped up the road towards the ridge, away from town as quickly as he could. In a half hour he made it to the pipeline road and moved off towards the west, off of the pipeline. His GPS was gone, his cell phone gone, but he had his little emergency survival kit in an altoid's can that he had carried everywhere, and he had his cache.


He stopped where he left the road, took the ranger beads and rubber bands off the outside of the Altoid's tin, and opened it. He took the small compass out and set a course that should take him back around the peaks of the pipeline trail; the same route that had ended his normal life yesterday.


Ben's crossed a small seasonal stream that was flowing now due to the November rains. He found a thick stand of big leave maple that hung down over a dry gravel bar, forming a canopy. There was about six feet of gravel leading from the edge of the stream to maple thicket. Ben dropped the caceh pipe and searched for a few minutes. He found the inevitable cans and trash, debris that is ever present in the forests of the Pacific Northwest. There was an old coffee can, rusted but still sturdy, and some smaller cans about the size of Campbell soup cans. He took two of those and the rusted coffee can.


Ben worked his way back to the gravel spit under the maples and began gathering some dead small twigs. He knew he had to hurry, but he also knew that his body needed heat and water. He made a quick three rock fire. He used small twigs, pounding them into fiber on a rock, and a little dry bark to build a small tent of tinder in between the rocks. He used a birthday candle stub from the Altoid's survival can, and one of the waterproof matches to start the fire. The small fire still made smoke as it first lit. The overhanging big leaf maple vines dispersed the smoke in the morning mist, and no column rose to give his location away.


Ben scoured one of the smaller soup cans as free of rust and grime as possible, using gravel from the stream bank, rinsed it in the stream, and filled it. He placed two larger branches across the rocks and set the can to heat.


While the water heated Ben unpacked his cache for the second time since unearthing it. Three feet long, six inches in diameter, it was simple a section of six inch PVC pipe that he had found discarded at a construction site. He bought two caps from the hardware store and glued one end on permanently, and used a second cap coated with wheel bearing grease to seal the other end when he was ready to bury the cache.


Ben's pipeline job meant that he was almost always away from the trailer for most of the day, and since he lived alone, he had finally decided to make the cache to store things that would be stolen if the trailer was broken into. In the “old days” as Ben thought of them, before the collapse of the dollar and banking, he would have stored his money and valuables in a bank or safety deposit box. That was no longer safe for anyone to do. Because of the rapid inflation of the dollar it was worth less and less as you held it in your hand, so Ben had been converting the cash to anything that held it's value and was small. He favored gold coins, silver coins, ammunition and hand guns. All were appreciated constantly, even appreciating faster than the price of gold itself, which was once again, the real standard of currency exchange between nations. Well, the Yuan and Ruble still kept their value pretty well, and even the Loonie, the Canadian dollar did pretty well, but you had to go to a bank to get them, and you lost value with every transaction. The ammunition, guns, and precious metals were the new standard, and they fit quite well into Ben's cache.


Ben had learned how to make the cache by reading how the Australians had done it when their gun laws had become more restrictive. Many refused to comply with the law and turn handguns and rifles in to the government, so that I had buried their weapons in plastic PVC pipe caches. That idea appealed to Ben and suited the remote locations his trailer was sited. Ben's adaptation was that he didn't dig a hole straight down but instead cut a small trench through the top soil and buried the pipe horizontally, but on a slight angle with the greased cap slightly uphill. After he he had dug one three foot hole he saw that it was not a process that he would likely repeat, yet he moved often. A trench was easy and fast. The danger was that someone with a metal detector could easily find it just a few inches down in the soil.


Ben slide everything from the cache out onto the dry gravel, and untied the plastic bag that served as a condensation barrier inside the tube. A small coin tube of gold American Eagles, a larger package of silver coins, five boxes of nine millimeter bullets, a half dozen boxes of .22 ammunition and a heavy cotton work shirt bundle lay exposed. Ben unrolled the work shirt to reveal two Smith and Wesson 9 millimeter pistols, and six spare ammunition clips.


He carefully unpacked the other small items and put them into his pockets. There was a heavy strap belt with ammunition pockets. Ben stripped off the plastic bag that had saved his life last night, and put the warm heavy work shirt on. He loaded four of the 9mm clips and slapped the magazines into the receivers. He put on the web belt and tucked the pistons into the waist band of his pants.


The water was boiling now and he pulled it off the fire to cool. As thirsty as he was he didn't want to be on the run with diarrhea. Streams in the lower elevations often were usually infected with intestinal parasites.


He sipped the warm water from the can, burning his fingers. He pulled the cuff of his sleeve down to serve as a glove. Crouching low over the fire he tried to think of why someone would want him dead, no. why important people wanted him dead. This whole mess had started with with yesterday's section of pipeline and what he had discovered at the top. He crouched low over the small fire, feeding it only small twigs. He wanted a hot, smokeless fire, not a long lasting one.


There was no doubt that his only thing to trade was the knowledge of what he found up there. It didn't seem all that important, just unusual. Time for him to get a closer look and see what was worth so much money and effort to Homeland Security.

Wednesday, December 12, 2007

FBR scene three concludes

Hi chicklets!

I've finished scene 3 this morning. I thought it was done but it wasn't, boy was I surprised. I've added to the bottom of the post below rather than make a new post. I'm currently working on Scene 4 but I need to take advantage of the sun that is warming the trailer. So I'm off to wash the trailer and truck. My back is doing my better after a spasm three or four days ago.

Enjoy, I hope. Scene 4 of Chapter 2 is pivotal, so stay tuned, but personally I'm looking forward to chapter 4 and 5, where damsels in distress appear and epic journeys begin.
mcnalan, free in the desert.

Sunday, December 9, 2007

FBR, chapter two, scene 3

Hi chickies. I've arrived in Quartzsite, found a nice spot and have begun unpacking. Unfortunately as I do every two years or so, I've tweaked my back and I'm working horizontally for the next few days.
Here is a Monday morning tidbit - scene 3 of chapter 2, Foreign Body Reaction.

Foreign Body Reaction, Alan McNeill Chap 2, scene 3


I want all the logging roads leading down to 101 and 199 sealed off . . . “

Say again? ..

I don't care, use town cops, use forest rangers . . .

Tell them we have an escaped prisoner, tell them he is a cop killer, tell them .. Fuck!” said Lady P as the phone bounced from her hand. Her black SUV bucked across the erosion trench, while she searched for the phone on the passenger side floor. The night was still ink black, but she had her spotlights and fog lights on too. At least the rain had stopped.

She found the phone, her connection had hung up. She rounded the last turn heading up to the ridge and came over the lip of the log landing. There Ben's trailer still smoldered.

No one here? First the idiots botch the simple job of removing the problem subject. Then they run him off the road. Then the dumb fucks loose him! thought Patricia. She was mystified at how many ways the simplest assignments could unfold to complex problems. She had taken this pipeline assignment for Homeland security with some reluctance. Providing security for gas and hazardous fuels transport was not usually the responsibility of Homeland Security, but this pipeline had it's secrets and her job and her advancement within the agency was dependent on her keeping those secrets.


She picked up her hand held transceiver and keyed the push-to-talk.


Who's securing the trailer site, and who is securing this road south?” She tried to regain her composure. Her previous outburst on the cell phone was stupid. She of all was well aware that every word she spoke by cell phone or walkie talkie was being recorded by satellites above her.


We're up on the ridge,” squawked back a tinny voice.


Do I understand that you are all up on the ridge?”


A cautious voice replied, “Well, we are sweeping the hill below us were the subject crashed.”


Again, all of you?”


Yes, ah, he has to be right below us and the imagery shows the river is difficult to cross here. We should have him in a minute.”


Lady P as she was known to her teams, P for perfection, thought for a moment and replied.


Break two off the search. Block the road south from the trailer and I want a guard on the trailer should he circle back. Lets get this done people”


Affirmative, sending two, Tully and Jamison coming . . . “


No names!”


Sorry.”


Patricia threw the handheld aside and hit speed dial on her cell. After many rings, a voice, rough from lack of sleep answered.

What now? I'm almost there.”


Did you bring the dossier I asked you for?”


I still don't understand what all this is about? Why are you doing this? Why did you wake me up in the middle of the night?”


Patricia stared at the phone for a moment then said, “Jacob, why in the world do you want to understand. You just do as you are told. Now, did you bring it?”


Jacob's reply was cut off as Patrica flipped the phone shut at the lights that were coming up behind her. She put her hand inside her tailored jacket and felt the grip of her 9mm Mak secure in her under shoulder holster. She relaxed as she recognized Jacob's Subaru Outback.


Jacob opened the door and stepped half out, He seemed frozen . He stood speechless gazing at the ruin of Ben's trailer


Jesus Christ! What is this? What have you done?” he said to glare at Patricia.


My job, asshole, now give me the folder.”


Jacob handed her the folder with all of Ben's employment and medical information.


Your job is blowing up my trailers? You're all nuts. When you called and told me to get up here I thought, hell, I don't know what I thought. Where is Ben?”


We'll have him in a few moments.”


What do you mean, have him? What has he done. He just did his job and walked the pipeline and filed as always.”


I'm afraid he walked where he shouldn't have Jacob,” said Patricia without looking up from the folder which was now spread out on the hood of Jacob's Subaru.


And this wouldn't have happened if you had kept him on his job. Whatever happens now Jacob, whatever happens now, is your fault. Remember that, shut up and go home.”


Jacob's mouth opened and closed twice before anything came out. “What did he do for God's sake? What are you people doing here? What happened to the trailer?” he said gesturing towards the smoking run of Ben's trailer.


Come here and look at this Jacob,” Patricia said tilting her head towards the paperwork from the folder.


Ben approached and bent his head in to see what she was looking at when she smoothly, fluidly drew the Makarov from her holster with her right hand. In one motion, she brought her right arm up and across, and the barrel of the gun smashed across Jacob's face in a vicious backhand.


Jacob fell backwards, clenching his face with both hands, screaming, blood spurting from his broken nose.


Patricia wiped the barrel of the Mak in the palm of her left hand, and paused entranced at how black the blood looked at night. She rubber her thumb and forefinger in her palm, feeling the thick slip of the blood. then the gun to her shoulder holster.


Go home Jacob, mind your own business. You don't, I'll kill you,” she said absently. She started a bit, came back to herself, gathered up the loose sheets of paper and turned towards the burned trailer, all without a second glance a Jacob, who lay moaning on the ground.


The trailer's destruction was immaterial to Patrica. This was not a fact finding mission, not a trailer destroying mission, this was a simple period to be placed at the end of a very small sentence, a minor reduction of infinitesimal threat. The line walker on this section could be a problem, and even if Ben had not disappeared off track for a few hours Patricia had been considering removing that threat anyway. What she had just read confirmed the need for the threat reduction.


Shit!” spat Patricia out loud. “Damnit.”

My phone worked, it shouldn't have worked. The cell phone signal jammers in each of the two SUV's should have made her phone appear to have no service. Yet she had been able to call Jacob as he drove up.


She reached through the window of her SUV and brought the hand held out, thumbing the tranmit button as she did so.


Do you have him?”


No, we haven't found him yet,” came back a dispassionate voice, relaxed voice.


“I”m sending one of the SUV's down now to block the road and leave a man at the trailer site in case he circles back.”

Patricia could see the lights bouncing down the grade. “Turn the cell phone jammer back on. You haven't got him yet.” Patricia forced her voice to be calm. She could alienate the hired help but not him. she recognized his voice, Simon. Cool Simon, deadly Simon, the founder and head of Global Security.


We found his phone, no need for the jam.”


What if he has two?”


There was a pause, and Patricia could hear Arthur's mind weighing his reply. They had history, her and Arthur. “It's back on now.”


Good.”


How do you want this finished,” asked Freddy.


Quickly,” she snapped.


I'm coming down.”


Delightful.”


Patricia remained leaning against the SUV. Her cell phone chirped it's despair at the loss of signal.


End of Scene 3.


Sunday, December 2, 2007

FBR, Chapter 2, scene 2

Note - Dec 6th - Alan is back in Q - see the main site for my first pictures of the season.

Good evening chickies from those of us drowning in water in Oregon. I was scheduled to leave today, noonish, but the passes are chains required for truck and trailer, and I'm not willing to beat up my new tires with chains. Tomorrow is warmer so I will watch the passes and slip over into California going south when the chain requirement is lifted.
Meanwhile, it is Monday tomorrow morning and thus I offer you a tidbit - a small scene 2 of chapter two. Remember chapter one is available to the right now as a pdf. Enjoying the storm in Oregon, longing for sun. -mcnalan

Foreign Body Reaction
by Alan McNeill
© December 2007



Foreign Body Reaction, Alan McNeill Chap 2, scene 2


Ben was moving fast now, the hillside had given way to a gentle slope. He drew east down the hill, stumbling less now as the ground evened out. The more he scrambled through the clear cut, almost in a crouched run, the warmer he got, even with his bare chest.

He stopped for a minute and looked for the glow that would indicate the direction to what was left of his trailer. He listened for any sound of pursuit. There was no sound, and no flashlights, but they might have night vision goggles. Still, Ben needed to move fast before they completed their search of the opposite side of the mountain. Ben reached into the back pocket of his cargo jeans and pulled out a small Altoids tin that contained the smallest survival kit he could put together. He opened it and felt for the small half watt LED flashlight. He closed it carefully and replaced the two rubber bands that secured the cover.


The LED was startlingly bright to his dark adjusted eyes. Ben cupped the flashlight in his palm allowing only a crack of light to escape to light the ground.

With the light he could increase the speed, and maintain his body temperature.


Ben kept the hint of the road above him to his right and in a few minutes arrived back at his smoldering trailer. He curved east and came up near the brush thicket by the privy. He shut the LED off and replaced it in his Altoid's can, and put the can back in his rear pocket.


There were no other vehicles at the ruins of his trailer. Both of the SUVs that Ben had seen before must still be up on the ridge looking for him. Ben would have liked to watch for a few more minutes, but as soon as he had stopped, the cold had begun seeping through his bare skin. The warmth of the collapsed trailer, still glowing in spots drew him forward. He did take a moment as he crept forward to check the propane bottles mounted on the tongue of the trailer frame. They were gone completely, just the charred remains of the feed lines hung of the steel frame.


Ben crawled up close on his belly. The warmth of the fire, despite the loss it implied, was about the best thing Ben had felt all night. He luxuriated in it, rolling on the warmed ground, allowing the radiant heat to warm all of his body. As wonderful as he felt, he knew that he must hurry. They would not look for him forever, and they might think to send someone back to seal off the road below him. He needed to get off this mountain before they found him.


Ben stayed low and circled the trailer, looking at the trash and debris that had been almost all of his possessions. The explosion and fire had left little that was recognizable. Ben searched for any clothing that was not burned beyond recognition, but he found little. A sock that hung off a branch a few feet away, and a melted blob that had been a nylon windbreaker. He did find a box of garbage bags that was only charred. He unstuck the mess and was able to unroll the melted portion leaving 3 good twenty gallon bags at the center of the roll.


He quickly tore a small 8” hole in the center of the bottom, and two holes, each about 4” long at the sides near the bottom. He pulled the bag over his head forcing his head through the rip, and then pulled his arms through the side tears. Immediately he felt warmer, and almost as important, his white skin was now sheathed in black plastic. Ben grabbed a handful of grey ash mud from the edge of the fire and smeared it over the garbage bag and tucked the loose end of the bag into his pants. He rolled the two remaining bags and put them in the back pocket with the survival kit, and resumed his search.


Because Ben had been injured in the financial crash of 2007, like almost everyone with a mortgage, he had become adamant that he would remain independent of society's control of him. That meant that most people thought Ben was a survival nut when really Ben just liked not to be part of a system that treated people like both the product and the production at the same time. It was like being part of a flock of sheep that built it's own fences and went willingly to be sheared. So let them think what they like, he thought.


Tonight that meant that Ben was searching quickly for the area near the privy where he had buried a small cache. He always placed these when he dropped his trailer and worked.


Ben had to chuckle at that thought. Pretty obvious that he couldn't protect his trailer. He found the rusted logging cable coiled where he had found it last week. When any area is logged a lot of broken and frayed steel cable is left everywhere throughout the forest. This section was heavy and rusted and coated with slippery mud. Ben pulled the coil just a foot to the side and dug down just a few inches with his hands through soft fir needles and forest floor debris, His fingers hit a smooth hard cylinder. It lay a few inches beneath the forest floor, and had been covered by the old steel cable.


Ben levered the cylinder up. It was 4 inches in diameter and about forty inches long. Made of white PVC plastic tubing, one end was capped with a permanent glued end. The end that had been slanted upward, the end that Ben had first uncovered was a cap that simply slipped over the tube. He slowly pulled the cap. It resisted and then released with a slow sucking sound. Ben put the cap aside, careful to keep the thick wheel bearing grease from touching the soil.


Inside the tube he pulled gently on the edge of a white bag. In moments the bag was unrolled and opened. For the first time since his trailer blew up Ben took a deep relaxed breath. Now he had something to work with, now he had a chance to get off this mountain alive.