Foreign Body Reaction continues - scene 4

If you've been following the story - look down the long post below this one until you find
MORE: chapter 1 scene four
and start reading there.

Soon chapter 1 will end and be made into a pdf.
The online novel Foreign Body reaction is copyrighted to me, Alan McNeill and cannot be used without my permission.

Tuesday - I just edited the last half of chapter one, so it reads much better. I may delay putting up posts for 3 days after I write them as I seem to make an inordinate number of errors on the first draft that makes me look pretty stupid. Anyway - reads better now.